Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font: major-bidi">there is a groing debate in each society that either parents or educational systems are in charge of training youngesters to be useful for their society. personally, I deeply believe that it is up to moms and dads to be more concerned about such matters than schools.
family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font: major-bidi">it is a genuine fact that parents encounter their kids more than anybody else in each single day. In the one hand, they can easily find out what mood does their child experiencing at the present time; which might be essential to take immediate action to resolve it. Perhaps, a teenager learns to take his revenge brutally; because he was not receive any consultation of his family when he had been mocked by classmates.In the other hand, moms and dads know better which job works adequately for their children when they get matured. Each person has a uniqe character suitable for certain sorts of jobs and parents can make a better contribution to such aim.
family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font: major-bidi">On the contrary, many others put the burden on schools due to thei professional staffs. Principals, tutors and consultants have been learning highly special courses like anthropology and they lead pupil to the best way most effective for their society. For instance, they may suspect that a highly introverted student is likely to be an author or play writer.
family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font: major-bidi">To recapitulate, there is a split among people to determine whether families or schools must take responsibility of preparing useful individuals for society. Despite incredible educative staffs in schools, I Still hold the family side; because, they have lived with their kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.04659498208 5.12529762239 137% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.3679719352 2.80592935109 370% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648745519713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.718439819 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.727272727 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0131909605824 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00950827572905 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0126942505504 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.010890536958 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127489383628 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 3.8 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.91 12.4159519038 193% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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