Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are many sports today such as the World Cup and the Olympics. Some believe that these events increase the emotional bond between nations and reduce tension between them.I will state my point in the following paragraphs.
First of all, it can be said that sport brings joy to the community and holding sports events enhances the unity of the countries.And it will ease the political tensions between countries.I remember in the 1990 World Cup the two South Koreans and North Korea competed.Although the North Koreans are not allowed to travel to South Korea, the North Koreans were unbelievably present at the Seoul City Stadium and encouraged their team.The people of North Korea, with tears streaming down, have shown that they are just an ordinary football cheerleader and have no regard for the tensions in the political relations of the two countries.And this shows the impact of sports competitions on enhancing unity among nations.
On the other hand, such competitions raise tensions between countries, such as, when there is competition between Korea and Japan, political tensions between countries increase.And the people of the two countries are moving away from each other emotionally and in solidarity.As a result, negative feelings of patriotism among the people of every country increase and these emotions seem as aggressive behavior among players and spectators.And each team blames the people of the other country for the tension.
In conclusion,I believe it is true that sports competitions increase the emotional spirit and relationships between nations. But sometimes the tension between them widens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43921568627 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85420159477 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.001763662 49.4020404114 510% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.166666667 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149109652686 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792309465236 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266344861309 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937396809578 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173826956148 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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