It is irrefutable that, proverbial hobbies and self interest has changed day by day. There are many reason behind it. However, I personally believe that, changes are really important and everyone has right to change their hobbies on timely basis.
At begin with, In the 21st century, is the era of modernatization. Every one is trying to follow updated trend and fashion of the society. People are more mature, understandable etc. They knows that, what they wants.So, they trigger their hobbies and self interest regarding their interest. For example, according to survey reports most of the juveniles are interesting to creates new ideas and plans to mounting money making. Nowadays, it is one of the best hobby for them.
On the other hand, over the time people hobbies are more creative. They take active part in socail welfare and try to help those people who are really needy and they are self dependent to other person.The NGOs and socail welfare are mounting day by day in the form of Shoukat Khannum cancer hospital and AIDS centre most of the social workers are providing free treatment to people. So the ratio of humanity is increasing just because of mature hobbies and self interest.
I personally beleive that, postive and responsible hobbies are the key of success. It has no issue if people want to enjoy and change their hobbies with the time.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, hobbies and interests should be change. It is important but with in limit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...erest has changed day by day. There are many reason behind it. However, I personally believ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...e more mature, understandable etc. They knows that, what they wants.So, they trigger ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...andable etc. They knows that, what they wants.So, they trigger their hobbies and self...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...e etc. They knows that, what they wants.So, they trigger their hobbies and self in...
^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'create'.
Suggestion: create
...ost of the juveniles are interesting to creates new ideas and plans to mounting money m...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...they are self dependent to other person.The NGOs and socail welfare are mounting da...
^^^
Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... mature hobbies and self interest. I personally beleive that, postive and responsible hobbies a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
...g that, hobbies and interests should be change. It is important but with in limit.
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and interests should be change. It is important but with in limit.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, regarding, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88188976378 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51895904895 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4980317045 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227508337848 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764182108675 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673192139855 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130437395791 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429442667672 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.