The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
The role of women in the society has been changed for the last twenty years. Now a day’s women are treated as equal to men in terms of rights, duties and responsibilities. They also have the right to work in big companies and earn handsome salary. Some people believe it to be a negative trend as women who spend most of the time outside and do not pay attention at their home, the adolescents go astray, however, other have an opinion that working women have more responsible and well-behaved teenagers. In my opinion, I do believe that working women are able to raise a well-educated and responsible child.
Some people agree that children are more attached to their mothers. So, it is essential for women to remain at home and take care of their children. Moreover, if mothers will not look after their youngsters then there will be an increased chance of them to indulge in illegal activities which will hamper their future growth and career. To elucidate, according to the report by the government in 2018 it is reported that children whose mothers are working are more likely involved in illicit activities such as drugs, alcohol and crime.
However, others opine that women have the right to work and live an independent life. if mothers are self-sufficient and are employed in a good organisation, they will be able to impart their adolescents with excellent knowledge, skills and responsible behaviour. Moreover, they will aid their children to develop self-confidence and self-competitive spirit which will help them to build a successful career. Furthermore, a working woman will be able to contribute financially for the education of their children. To illustrate, there is a direct correlation between the increase in the managerial positions and children of working mother as working women are able to impart better understanding about the real life experience an erudition to their children
To conclude, I vehemently agree that working women are able to raise children who are not only good citizens but are also more accountable for their actions and thus are capable of building a successful professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08806818182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96090743146 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502840909091 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.822454415 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229780431395 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952129000996 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790617603045 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143388808946 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607981317446 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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