The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
The role of women in the society has been changed for the last twenty years. Now a day’s women are not only treated equal to men in terms of rights, duties and responsibilities but also have the right to work and earn handsome salary. Some people believe it to be a negative trend as professional women’s have a high tendency that their adolescents go astray, however, other have an opinion that working women have well-behaved teenagers. In my opinion, I do believe that working women are able to raise a well-educated and responsible child.
Some people agree that children are more attached to their mothers. So, it is essential for women to remain at home and take care of their children. Moreover, if mothers will not look after their youngsters then there will be an increased chance of them to indulge in illegal activities which will hamper their future growth and career. To elucidate, according to the report by the government in 2018 it is reported that children whose mothers are working are more likely involved in illicit activities such as drugs, alcohol and crime.
However, others opine that women have the right to work and live an independent life. if mothers are self-sufficient and are employed in a good organisation, they will be able to impart their adolescents with excellent knowledge, skills and responsible behaviour, moreover, will aid them developing self-confidence and self-competitive spirit which will help them to build a successful career. Furthermore, a working woman will be able to contribute financially for the expensive education of their children. To illustrate, there is a direct correlation between the 30 percent increase in the managerial positions and children of working mother as they are able to impart better understanding about the real life experience an erudition to their teenagers
To conclude, I vehemently agree that working women are able to raise children who are not only good citizens but are also more accountable for their actions and thus are capable of building a successful professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17210682493 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02105424455 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.641492814 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.25 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215827922742 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101049036379 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790776010005 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131612740803 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570469469089 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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