“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
It is argued by some individuals that researching and treating infections involves a huge amount of money, therefore, it should be better used in improving precautionary steps. I completely disagree with the notion because of the fast outcome of medicinal treatments and preventive steps are not fully proven.
To begin with, research on curing people with medicinal treatments involves a huge amount of budget because of the rapid actions against infections. Numerous infrastructures and different medical equipment are working every day to cure people of infections around the world and the speed of action against infection is commendable as compared with preventive steps. For instance, small medical pills can cure people of diseases and severe health conditions rather than taking various precautionary measures to prevent possibilities of infection.
Similarly, prevention does not ensure human safety at all stages. Precautions are difficult to maintain especially in densely populated regions like India and China, where masses movement is huge and communicable diseases are difficult to prevent. Therefore, it is evident that treatment and research on deadly infections must continue to cure people from health-related infections. For example, malaria infection spread is common in India and every year the cases of hospitals with malaria increases during the rainy season, even after making people aware of precautionary steps against infection.
In conclusion, I do not believe that we should spend more money in a defensive approach to save people from the risk of infection instead continue spending on research and treatments because of the reasons mentioned in above paragraphs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69019607843 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00005382497 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9078281704 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15045818367 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626482510349 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341792765579 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919628406785 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371940979376 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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