The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree?
Single phrase “Prevention is better than cure” carries a deeper meaning in itself. Every individual need to consider safeguarding their health from problems, so that chance of treatment can be reduced drastically. I agree that, with the appropriate divergence of government funding in this direction, major revolution can be achieved for successful implementation of motto “Health is Wealth”.
Firstly, we need to understand that, by adopting healthy habits, we can reduce chances of illness. It will not only keep our body physically fit but also lead to colossal savings in our monetary and time resources. Negligence in maintaining adequate precautions, which results in weak body and may result in lackluster performance at workplace. For instance, a night without sleep will lead to weak immune system and people cannot concentrate at workplace. In spite of spending lot of on medicine, a small care will result greater results and will save from illness. Healthy population can become a treasure of any country. The country without diseases and illness will face a long-term growth in its national income.
Secondly, maintenance of healthy lifestyle demands tremendous efforts on government part by way of diverting the resource in the achievement of healthy society. A Country need to divert its funding in spreading awareness and delivering the right atmosphere in the country. Neither any individual nor any single corporate house, on its own, can take up this large-scale project. Moreover, unless government put a curb on advertisements, which promote medicines, these are bound to flourish. As an example, any medicine advertisement extends an implicit message that even if somebody does not take care of himself, we are there to cure. Providing a dedicated allocation in the budget so that awareness campaigns, necessary prizes for healthy people, and free yearly medical checkup camps for early determination of diseases can be set up. Since plastic is major cause behind diseases, accordingly, hefty taxes should be levied on it otherwise its continuous use will have many repercussions on people health and cannot be reduced. Towards better future, nation need to invest today. Before considering any short term gains, government need to consider that a small lose today is far better that to obtain notable aims of healthy future.
To conclude, it is rightly said that “Health soul resides in Healthy Body” We completely admit that preventing body from illness is everyone’s duty towards himself, his family and to the nation as a whole. Government role is crucial towards the attainment of long term vision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43855421687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05452078999 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597590361446 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2606961087 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.476190476 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110177646768 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029673097038 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333146461821 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735965866623 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047618308042 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.