Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?
What other factors should be considered?
During current times of mild slowdown in global economies, selections of right job has become a vital factor. There are majority of papulose assigning income based job at higher level in contrast of other factors. Considering the benefits of income based job, I could not resist my inclination towards their approach.
On the one hand, income based job provides financial stability, which is not only important for proper nourishment of children but also helpful for their educations and career building. Moreover, happy family will lead to ultimate higher job satisfaction followed by focused and productive job performance. On the other hand, among other benefits reaped are higher social status due to higher savings and disposable income followed by high contacts. Moreover, higher accumulated savings extends opportunity to incorporate new company and end up giving employment to others. It can be substantiated by an example of modeling career wherein models do not hesitate to compromise for the sake of highly earned modeling contracts.
Needless to mention that all people cannot be alike such as Dr. A P J Abdul Kalam. There are several other factors which are equally important to be considered. Amon gall job profile, learning exposure and growth opportunity occupies higher place in the pyramid. It is rightly said “Success follows the perfection”. It does depend on age as well. A recently graduated persons prioritize job profile, learning and training. In contrast, employee, in his fifties, prefer income and savings to insure his retirement.
In the end, to sum up, there is a wide list of determinants while job selection, it depends on individual preferences, family financial situation, age group, piousness and countryman ship, such as Dr. Kalam. In my views, in the times of hardship, money plays essential and crucial role over others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...ob has become a vital factor. There are majority of papulose assigning income based job ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and countryman ship, such as Dr. Kalam. In my views, in the times of hardship, mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in contrast, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37966101695 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93956360462 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5416547344 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247568447196 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697210759925 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584382533518 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137601312348 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640564941807 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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