The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree?
Single phrase “Prevention is better than cure” carries a deeper meaning in it. Every individual need to consider safeguarding their health from problems, so that chance of treatment can be reduced drastically. I completely agree that, with the appropriate divergence of government funding in this direction, major revolution can be achieved for successful implementation of motto “Health is Wealth”
Firstly, we need to understand that, by adopting healthy habits, we can reduce chances of illness. It will not only keep our body physically fit but also lead to colossal savings in our monetary and time resources. Negligence in maintaining adequate precautions, which results in weak body and may result in lackluster performance at workplace. For instance, a night without sleep will lead to week immune system and lower concentration at workplace. Healthy population can become a treasure of any country. The country without diseases and illness will face a long term growth in its national income.
Secondly, maintenance of healthy lifestyle demands tremendous efforts on government part. Country need to divert its funding in spreading awareness and delivering the right atmosphere in the country. Neither any individual nor any single corporate house, on its own, can take up this large scale project. Moreover, government need to curb on advertisements, which promote medicines. As an example, any medicine advertisement extends an implicit message that even if somebody does not take care of himself, we are there to cure. Dedicated budget need to be allocated for awareness campaigns, necessary prizes for healthy individuals, free yearly medical checkup camps for early determination of diseases should be set up. Since plastic is major cause behind diseases, accordingly, hefty taxes should be levied on it. Towards better future, nation need to invest today. Before considering any short term gains, government need to loose today to attain objectives of healthy future.
To conclude, it is rightly said that “Health soul resides in Healthy Body” We completely admits that preventing body from illness is everyone’s duty towards himself, his family and to the nation as a whole. Government role is crucial towards the attainment of long term vision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 929, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ny short term gains, government need to loose today to attain objectives of healthy f...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'admit'
Suggestion: admit
...des in Healthy Body' We completely admits that preventing body from illness is ev...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5754985755 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09364979745 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8690739441 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117818611698 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330539194756 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291170222851 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744507706921 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464766081252 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.