Prison is common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
Prison sentence is the most common punishment for who commit the crime. However, these days and ages, some people believe that education can influence to eliminate the problem of who do crimes from its roots. In my opinion both education and prison is substantial to impede community of committing crimes.
In the one hand, the reason why prisons are of the necessity for social security is diverse. Prisons are where could take juvenile delinquents away from other society to firstly, ensure that other citizens are safe, secondly upbringing them for being law-abiding in future. Furthermore, imprisonment sentence for heinous criminals such as murderers or rapists is the best action to restrict the privilege of offences and high risk situations. Survey of Prisoners Rehabilitate of US, demonstrate that people who condemned to jail, which have miserable life in a small cell, would become more obedient.
On the other hand, education serves as a remedy for the origins of crimes. Being educated cause to be well-informed of the sequences of even petty crimes. For instant, there is a great coherence between the level of the education and committing crimes. In most countries, educated people earn more money and since money is the main inducement of many crimes, such as burglary and robbery, they would dispel any ideas of breaking laws.
To tell a story short, there is no preference to take consideration that whether better education and imprisonment would take effective role in coping with offenders. Hence, both not only tackle with the problem but also enhance security to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2519379845 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7340064335 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9424796314 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151759178949 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052183165559 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557729884912 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925195687816 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626912507208 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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