Prison is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education.
Do you agree or disagree?
many countries fight the crime with the imprisonment. therefore, they are over populated in many countries. I am certain that by providing a better education for mankind, would be much more effective than locking people up.
The humans will learn how to behave and cooperate in society from the early age. therefore, most important aspect of their life is who are they surrounded with and who is guiding the path. It is critical to get proper education both from school and behavior wise. people who do not have enough knowledge on those field are more likely to to end up where they do not want to. A good illustration about that comes from my school years. In everyones class there is couple of students who do not obey discipline and do not respect rules. As a consequence he ended up in prison.
More then often people who have served their punishment will be sent back within 6 months. problem lies how they educate themselves while serving their punishment. prisoners will educate each others, how not to get caught next time. therefore many prisoners after prison can not function in society no more as they are adjusted living on other behaviour patterns. For example, well known criminal is Estonia, ants. ants served 5 years because burglary. within that time he made many friend and plans. 3 months after realise he was caught robbing bank with cell mate. In conclusion we can see that prison do not solve the problem.
To summarise, prisons are not the best solution to fight with the crime. Clearly, proper education about how to behave and act in society outweigh punishment comparison with prison. Accordingly over half inmates will be locked up within half a year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86851211073 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47977897562 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8270231341 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.9545454545 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1363636364 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192837448831 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518371820377 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059101536741 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117064695809 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335312357752 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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