Question- Children can learn effectively by watching television.Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although it is sometimes thought that by watching television children can gain fruitful knowledge,thus, there is a belief that watching television at school and home ought to be made regular. In my opinion, children should not be allowed to on a daily basis, instead,they should generate reading habits to gain knowledge.
A good reason to restrict children from not watching television everyday is that it diverges their concentration from studies. Adolescents get gravitated to any t.v programmes very easily which would eat up their study time and would not let them focus on their school work. This would not let them Excel in their academics as they would not be able to apply themselves completely.
Another point to consider is that, if children are not allowed to watch t.v then parents can easily inculcate the practice if reading books in them. This would help them learn alot about the world and current affairs,which will boost their general knowledge to a great extent. Teenagers with reading habits usually have good vocabulary which help them to do well in competitive exams when they become adults.
Finally, not having the habit of watching television everyday give the kids a lot of time to spend with their family and friends. For example, children who spend a lot of time with their parents or siblings develops a good bond which they carry with them life long. Instead of spending time in front of the television if a child plays with his friends that would teach him team work. This would be helpful for a child when he steps in the outside world as a grown up.
In conclusion, watching television regularly should he strictly prohibited as there are different other ways to do effective learning in order to gain knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , thus
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: , which
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94612794613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63705801624 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8612389088 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257265254312 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899248166837 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942368215744 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16547710683 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104093485944 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.