Question: Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
Everyone likes to keep hard earned money and do not want to pay government tax but without tax, country can’t survive as money is required for various welfare schemes for citizens. I believe that every individual must pay taxes to make the government strong which help to make the nation even stronger and bright. I shall explain why I think like this.
People who think that they have right to keep their earning have some valid points. First of all, corruption is one of the worst problems in government offices and people do not have idea where the money is being spent. Most of the governments are alleged for money scams and in the past these charges were found true by respective court. This not only shaken the trust of the people but also lost interest in schemes running by governments. For instance, common wealth corruption fund irregularities were on the wall in India and citizen did not show any interest in games held in Delhi. Secondly, person wishes to spend the money even for welfare as per his/her choices. People have different perspectives in spending the money and some people’s ways do not match with the government expenditure.
However, above point seems to be fairy tale and no nation can sustain without tax collection. Government main revenue is tax collection from citizens and this tax system has been in place for ancient time. Government spend the money on different agendas such as national security, education system, health services, build common infrastructure and this can only be feasible if government has enough funds. Through tax collection, government amassed large sum of money which is much higher than individual deposit in bank or other system. For instance, building highway requires billions of rupees which are almost impossible for individual to spend. Furthermore, apart from development, government duty is also to protect people from external threats and help in calamities which obviously require large chunk of money.
To recapitulate, though governments do not use the money wisely from public purse, tax collection is the only way to fund the government and public can pressurize the government to be transparent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...n in place for ancient time. Government spend the money on different agendas such as ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...n in place for ancient time. Government spend the money on different agendas such as ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urize the government to be transparent.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936355284 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8080139997 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.470588235 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204345251642 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717622612395 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076492013891 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12964993717 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704739396603 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.