You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
You should write at least 150 words
Write a letter for railway manager because of the losing your item which contains some in the train.
- describe the item,
- explain how you lost,
What do you want him to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left my iPad in the train while traveling from London to Nottingham.
This iPad was gifted to me by my brother-in-law on my anniversary last month. Of course the iPad is apple make but it is latest model, that is, AP50 having 8 inches of display and of orange shade which is quite distinguished. Initially my seat was confirmed in the AC-3rd so I occupied my seat at London central station. Since I was going for client meeting and presentation, I commenced the presentation in iPad without wasting anytime. After 30 minutes, train staff confirmed that my ticket got upgraded to AC-1 compartment owing to last minute cancelations and therefore, being a loyal customer, upgrade was done and no money was charged. Following the request, I shifted to new seat and continued my journey to Nottingham in 1st AC compartment.
On reaching, I rushed to meeting which was half an hour drive from station. While in the meeting, I did not find an iPad and realized that it has been left either in taxi or train. I immediately called to taxi driver and he declined to have seen the iPad with me.
I request you to instruct the lost and found department to find out the iPad. I may be contacted at 9811275660 for any further information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Chama
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
...Of course the iPad is apple make but it is latest model, that is, AP50 having 8 inches of...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... found department to find out the iPad. I may be contacted at 9811275660 for any ...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...811275660 for any further information. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67219917012 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80186549165 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.057106622 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109686545104 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423457537003 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413138566162 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846418545826 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481495761143 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.