In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In the last few decades, many changes have arrived in family structures that have resulted in a change in the roles of its members. A whole family was living together in one big house in the past; however, very few families are living with their uncle and aunt’s family today. Various changes can take place that would have some positives and negatives on individuals and societies.
People are moving out from their joint families and live a separate and independent life. Earlier, a whole family was sharing the same house, staying connected closely with each other. Nevertheless, people want to live only with their family, which includes parents and children because of some reasons, such as jobs, or to maintain their personal life. Consequently, a family would not see and interact with other family members frequently, and they would know less about each other in the future. For example, families sometimes forget the names of other children in their family because they rarely get to talk to each other.
The change in family structure has some benefits and flaws that would affect individuals and societies both. Scarcity of communication would weaken the bond of family members. Some families might take an important decision individually that may cause a severe consequence, in which no one would be able to help. Moreover, the youth generation would never consider living in a joint family in the future because of the changes in the present. On the other hand, the family and its members would be able to maintain their personal life, and one would become responsible for their family; thus, the person would be an effective decision-maker in every situation. People would be excited to meet their relatives, whom they have not met for a long time.
To conclude, although changes are taking place rapidly that have many positives and negatives for everyone, a family is of utmost importance for a person; therefore, it is crucial to take appropriate steps to sustain the traditional joint-family culture.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0960960961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62054644303 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510510510511 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0470140129 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197549079593 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851393507057 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817969305066 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149309751346 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840620048578 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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