In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, more attraction is shifted to super stores or huge shopping centers instead of small local shops. There are several reasons behind it, but apart from the reasons question arise if this transformation is really helping society to develop? I would like to discuss these in below part of essay.
In order to understand the positive and the negative of above issue, it is important to first dig into the cause of the problem. What are the factors of current transition of customers from small shops to malls? Well the answer is small shops always have limited variety of products due to budget and space constraint. Customer who are looking for the choices will get only limited options to compare with, whereas on other hand, large shopping centers and malls usually contains spacious shops with wide range of products. Moreover, the other benefit is that you can find multiple shops at one place, for instance, you can find cloth market and shoe market in a same mall. Various discounts are also available in malls so why would a buyer will go to small shops instead of malls?
It is true that there are benefits of malls but in my opinion this has a lot of consequences on local shop owners. Despite of having good quality and unique product line available, they are not able to make good profit. Even availability of local shops in nearby locations is not helping them in gaining popularity. Some shop owners are struggling for survival due to reduction in sell which also have a negative impact on families of such shop owners.
Change is the only constant in today's world. To grow in future people need to acknowledge and adapt the changes in society and mold themselves accordingly. This will help in reduction of negative impact caused by the change of era.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8013029316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44792120398 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1819323563 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338122710824 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977889573996 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696219701443 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169194137618 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903772721196 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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