Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years.
What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge experience.
These days, wildlife statistical information are easily available from different sources of media and it can clearly be noticed that the population of wildlife was declined dramatically throughout the last fifty years. Since ecology of the world is depended on each other, humans are responsible taking actions to stop this. In this essay, two causes of wildlife extinction, direct and indirect human impact, and prevention actions are explained.
The vital cause of reduction in wildlife population is affected by direct human impact such as hunting and fishing. One of the good solution to protect this is creating wildlife free zone. For example, Myanmar’s government announced Bago Yoma as a wildlife free zone and the number of wildlife in that particular area was steadily increased in next year annual wildlife report. Therefore, the authority will require to enforce such area to protect the extinction of wildlife.
Indirect human impact such as forest fire and building dams are also threading the wildlife. For instance, in Indonesia, land authority expands new lands for building by firing forests every year and in China, because of the big dams on the river, there are drought in every year after rainy season. These human impacts on the environment are also indirectly affected to wildlife. So, before execution of a mega project, the environmental and wildlife impact should be taken into consideration.
Wildlife are being threaded by human for decades and in future, it will in turn disturbed the life of human since the ecosystem is depending on each other. As human, we should stop all the activities that can cost the life of animal species to save not only ecosystem but also ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enforcing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enforcing
.... Therefore, the authority will require to enforce such area to protect the extinction of ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...being threaded by human for decades and in future, it will in turn disturbed the life of ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...d the life of human since the ecosystem is depending on each other. As human, we should stop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2274368231 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73652400795 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1828114238 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155890027738 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551208351589 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453053873762 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966751852916 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509422362315 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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