Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages overweigh the disadvantages?
The idea of shifting the large businesses and factories from city center to rural area becomes a popular trend. Although the process takes huge efforts, there are enormous benefits behind this concept. In this essay, pros and cons of shifting the businesses to regional areas are highlighted.
The major benefit of moving the business places to rural area is space creation. It can not only help government’s urban development plan that is vital to solve 20th centuries problem, the congested lifestyle of the city center but also create more space for the businesses since the land prices are cheaper in rural area. On the other hand, the development of rural area can be resulted from this movement. For instance, many staff will travel, spend money and even settle in the areas that locate close proximity of their job and these are important for a development of rural area.
Conversely, there are disadvantages behind the relocating of the business offices. Firstly, the companies will need to allocate budget for relocation and renovation of the new place that can cost huge sum of money. Moreover, it is necessary to consider the extra transporting time and cost for the workers staying in city center. Initial stage of the shifting is a tedious process as well.
While there are strong pros and cons on the case, my opinion is that the relocating can bring more benefits than drawbacks. Despite of the inconveniences at the early stage of the changes, it can only bring the good things after adaptation. Governments should also enforce by providing benefits to the businesses that are willing to relocate in rural area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centuries'' or 'century's'?
Suggestion: centuries'; century's
...opment plan that is vital to solve 20th centuries problem, the congested lifestyle of the...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...nd even settle in the areas that locate close proximity of their job and these are important fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70483315656 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4575379349 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118547461403 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418428937684 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312408990024 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678603235555 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354533080294 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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