Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the rapid economic development, people are attracted to the cities which eventually became large urban centers. as usual, large companies and industry are located here due to huge workforce, infrastructure and other facilities. Nevertheless, some think that large companies and industry should move to regional areas. There are advantages and disadvantages and this essay will discuss both.
The top most benefit is the development in the regional areas. In order to move, companies and industry heavily depend on the infrastructure in the area. So, the infrastructure in the area will be developed. Secondly, more job opportunities will be available in the area. Initially it will be in the civil and constructions fields during the infrastructure development phase. After the companies have moved in, more job opportunities will be available in the goods and service fields. Thirdly, people will not have to move to the over populated urban centers when there are lot of opportunities in the local areas. This will ease the population issue in the urban centers as well. Fourthly, there is limited space in the urban centers for expansion and new developments for the companies and moving to regional areas will be a good solution.
The major drawback of moving to regional areas is the pollution and destruction happening to the environment. Due to the population, vehicles and factories, the natural resources in the urban centers are already polluted or almost depleted. This is not the case in the other areas. With the development and construction, the natural resources, flora and fauna in the region are threatened. The damage to the environment can affect for many generations and this will over-weigh the advantages of the process. Secondly, the impact to the societies will be irreversible. With the development and attraction of the people to the region, all the bad influences will also infuse with the local societies. Thirdly, companies will have to lose some of their workforce due to reluctance to leave the urban centers.
In conclusion, there are advantages as well as disadvantages in this process. If a well-planned system is developed to minimize the negative effects, advantages can outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31741573034 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13029125328 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457865168539 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6255139619 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3043478261 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4782608696 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325976569561 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946670776436 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805480959411 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204172173497 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107477670785 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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