Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is and what can be done to change it?
The modern world in which we live has seen the development of science in all aspects. There are numerous scientific papers introducing activities that are either advantageous or disadvantageous for our health. However, there are a high majority of people who disregard scientific facts and continue unhealthy practices. This essay seeks to enlist a few reasons behind this negative trend, followed by feasible solutions.
While there are a plethora of reasons as to why people ignore the scientific opinion regarding this subject, a few of them are prominent. Firstly, most healthy activities are strenuous. Due to the evolved lifestyle of today’s generation, people have the tendency to be more indolent. Hence, they tend to distance themselves from working out and playing sports and they are more accustomed to playing video games instead. Secondly, the mechanical way of life these days scarcely allows people to have extra time. Therefore, they apt for faster, unhealthier means. For example, due to lack of time, the majority of people are forced to use cars or fast public transport instead of riding bicycles or walking in order to commute. Last but not least, many people do unhealthy activities simply because they are more fun and exciting. Take a concept such as eating as an example. Tasting an unhealthy cuisine is usually an exciting experience, whereas consuming healthy food such as salad is boring.
Although the aforementioned attitude has deteriorated the public's health, there are methods to combat it. First and perhaps the most effective method is to remind people regarding the drawbacks of unhealthy activities on a higher scale. Erecting informative billboards in cities and highways is a step in the right direction. An alternative way to change this trend is the offering of free gym passes to the employees by the companies, which encourages the workers to work-out more often. Lastly, raising the salary or giving a bonus to employees that follow a healthier lifestyle and do not have unhealthy habits like smoking or drinking can certainly be helpful.
In conclusion, many people tend to do unhealthy activities despite the recommendation of scientific research. Nevertheless, this trend can be changed if the right endeavors such as those mentioned above are undertaken.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
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...mentioned attitude has deteriorated the publics health, there are methods to combat it....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31880108992 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92508303199 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58583106267 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8150279018 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9523809524 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265283351104 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675902881128 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465087356573 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170474975349 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341200461086 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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