Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that scientific research should be conducted by the governments instead of private businesses. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea due to below main reasons.
First, there are some primary causes against the idea that corporations should carry and control scientific research. In terms of quality and objectivity, they can be tempted to manipulate the results to maximize the profit. In fact, there are some scandals about the research as the result of inadequate and quick trials. For example, after being introduced hurriedly, Thalidome caused thousands of malformed children, which was a notorious event. Moreover, from ethnical perspective, leaving research into the hands of companies in the area of genetic engineering would lead to negative consequences. For instance, GM (genetic modified) crops have caused harmful problems to people’s health, because of meddling with nature.
On the other hand, although governments have other pivotal areas to allocate resources, research taken by governments is more beneficial and reliable. Obviously, it is more efficient and high-quality to provide university funds to carry scientific reasearch. These organizations do not focus on breaking into new markets or gain competitive edge, but aim to maximise the qualities. Also, only national authorities will prioritize proper areas of scientific reasearch such as medicines or agriculture, which are urgent to citizens. They are responsible for taking citizens’benefit into consideration, rather than gaining profits.
In conclusion, from the reasons I have mentioned, I believe that governmental bodies should take the responsibilities of carrying and controlling scientific research, not the profitable corporations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.859375 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32394103202 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3877143565 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287145513646 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878243416873 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868868115556 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173506341324 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041945860431 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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