Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A recent research was intoduced by scientist, that There are a great deal of people depend on eating fast meals, which it will affect on their health. However, some say that human can avoid having these fast meals by educating them about effects, which it may happen to their health in the future. While other people think that education is not an effient way to satisify human kind about passive habits in eating junk food.

On the one hand, keeping the fast food away is a very complicated. But education could force them to look for healthy food. So this tactic can show the people about how junk food would affect on human body. For example, education ministry can include few courses pertaining to health issues. In addition, it may present the proper food as well as human how they can benefit from it.

However, others think that Education will not be as an advantage. As a result, people have already known that ready meals have a bad target in the future on their health. Besides, For example, workers do not have enough time to cook at home, due to working for long hours whole day. Furthermore, they have undergone under pressure of real life and its needs. Although, fast meals is a negative part in their life, it has a high demand by customers. It is like something that people are being addicted in it. So that they can not leave this habit.

to conclude, i tend to believe that fast meals have the biggest effection in human life. As it is the reason for the development of diseases all over the world. Cosequently, people must be awares of their health, so that they can be healthful. It is totally harmful for people. Wich it will cause ailment like obesity, high cholestrol, and several of stomach problems. According to Health Organisation has reported that a lot of people get sick by having like these kind of these meals. At the end, government may increase the taxation on it. So people can take it off.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...end on eating fast meals, which it will affect on their health. However, some say that hu...
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...satisify human kind about passive habits in eating junk food. On the one hand,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62028985507 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33688630385 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0790021954 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3043478261 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261763202204 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735970806524 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681884557489 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173054644307 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681058458376 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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