Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present age, using social media and sharing personal information have sparked much debate. Some people assert that sharing personal information on social media platform helps to socialize with different people across the world. Personally, I agree that sharing personal information on such websites can be risky and dangerous.
Social media has become very common among all age groups. Websites like Facebook, Instagram and twitter are mainly used as a tool to network with people and share information. These websites ask for personal information like name, age, location and few other information, it also has an option to upload a profile picture. By sharing all the information, people agree to the terms and conditions which they probably do not read. These terms and conditions allow these website to share your personal information to other service providers. As a result, your information is leaked to another company which you are not aware of.
In addition, posting photo's and videos on social media platforms can be disastrous. Through social media websites, one can easily save image with just one click of a button. Moreover, these images can be used for wrongful or inappropriate things. For example, a persons face can be used for another persons body and the image can be used for anything without knowing, whether the image is fake or real. Similarly, hackers create a fake profile in these websites using different images of a person to collect personal information of others.
On the other hand, social media is used extensively in the world and it is one of the best ways to connect with people you know, no matter how far they are and where they lived. It is the best way to connect and network with people across the globe. Consequently, the benefits of using social media is limited.
In summary, I would concede that using social media websites have some advantages. Despite that, sharing personal information on these websites and getting hacked supports much better way. Overall, I am convinced that sharing personal information can be very risky and dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... By sharing all the information, people agree to the terms and conditions which ...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'these websites'?
Suggestion: this website; these websites
... read. These terms and conditions allow these website to share your personal information to o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, in addition, in summary, you know, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61862782168 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479651162791 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5838566359 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.15 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358712791617 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138281342202 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111162812331 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238831554414 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869330372893 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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