Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.
In the modern era, an increasing concern for many people around the world is finding a good job.There is a many reason for why this people consider like that.First of all, obviously it’s about the employers attitude.In this essay I will examine to this arguments and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, finding a good job is depend on the person quality. Most employers choosing the employee such as a has high education, bilingual or perfect personals skills.Thus, for some person who has a lack of experience it is a quite difficult to join their group.Moreover, this occupation be able to more professional rather than other ones.For example, if any person who want to join to this group should be know to some basic requirements.Such as a improving theirselves for second langue.Moreover, this competition is impact on people negatively.For illustration, they lost their sharing emotion.
And the other hand, some part of managements has a negative consideration about to new employee.According to this manager, the new employees are more irresponsibility than the earliest ones.For example, they are lazy because of this habit they are unable to improve their basic personal skills. Such as working in group or talking front of crowded people. Furthermore, there is a one more reason relevant to this kind of people. For example, the other main reason is internship.Each student must have to attempt to internship program for learning convenient work style. For example, many countries has an opportunity for young people after the high school, if they want they can work in the summer as an intern.
In conclusion, view of my opinion the solution is basic and mandatory. The maintain of internship programs after the each kind of education establishment. Secondly, in the earliest age each individual should be join the group games and workshops for learning how becoming more intelligent and useful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19659190262 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.422267547 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.090909091 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114150449849 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401513030928 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522987629468 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660645046234 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509467478462 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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