Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
With the development of society and technology, a variety of people have sought their own transportations such as their own cars, motorcycles and trucks. However, some countries have started to banish them to use public transportations such as buses, taxis or metro on vehicle-free days. Despite fact that background inevitably leads a number of people to controversy wherein stand disadvantages such as inconvenient lifestyle regarding this issue, it has potential positive perspective to improve people and city life.
Undoubtedly, banning private transportation brings about people’s inconvenience. It is said that when it is vehicle free days, it makes people uncomfortable because it is not easy to get where people want to go like going to work. However, in these too busy days to do exercise, if people have to use public transportation, they should walk to transportation stop or use bicycle, which makes people to do exercise consequentially. Also, it will make air quality improved gradually if we reduce using our own cars. Hence, it has people’s life better.
In addition, it is thought that if people are not using their own public car, it will be busier or slower but it can make faster life. It is able for public transportation such as buses or taxis to move faster when reducing traffic congestion. Also, avoiding crowdedness from driving to the city will get parking problem, concern and their expense decreased. Moreover, it will result in safer and more spacious for pedestrians and bicycles.
In conclusion, even though, restriction of private cars in vehicle free days is considered as negative for some people, it will have a positive influence on people’s life and city life such as improving air quality, health and increasing security for human beings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28919860627 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1735026373 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1241360827 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372765745075 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12349734212 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942251518239 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221544559086 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711182335916 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.