In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes are replacing cars . Why is this the case? Which development do you think is better?
It is widely acknowledged that choosing between automobiles and bikes in some megacities. although there are undoubtedly some reasons for this tendency. From my perspective, this tendency is given rise to by myriad factors and I strongly believe that enormous benefits brought by using bicycles outweigh that of cars.
On the one hand, there are various compelling interpretations why citizens drive cars as main vehicles. First and foremost, in modern days, each individual's life is becoming much busier than in the past. Therefore, people make a decision to use four-wheels vehicles because they are faster than compared with cycles as well as these residentials save a colossal amount of time and make full use of one to concentrate on their own work and other activities. Another compelling point is that pedaling is predominantly appropriate with those who have a demand for physical fitness, while automobiles are highly convenient and safe. For example, even if it is a scorching day or heavy rain, cars are able to protect passengers defending against these extreme weather conditions, especially when they have to travel a long distance.
I would contend that the growing tendency toward riding bikes should be altered cars is going to have some benefits. The most obvious pros of this tendency is that travelling by bicycles is to protect our environment. Using eco-friendly vehicles may contribute to diminish the emission of greenhouse gas eliminated from petroleum fuels vehicles and improve the global warming condition. Another reason is cycling has a positive impact on people’s health. It is clear that beginning with using a bike for short journeys to work or to school will be an effective way to build up fitness and boost an individual's health.
In conclusion, In my opinion, both approaches have their pros and cons. I would like to encourage people to ride a bicycle instead of choosing vehicles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...irst and foremost, in modern days, each individuals life is becoming much busier than in th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ve way to build up fitness and boost an individuals health. In conclusion, In my opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2154340836 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9046851198 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8299379734 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180559255205 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607585275268 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561529034019 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11060104767 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206130763718 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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