It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?
It is widely acknowledged that students choosing study science subjects as their major in many nations is a minority. Although there are undoubtedly some reasons of this tendency. In this essay will demonstrate some measures can be taken to mitigate the potential consequences.
On the one hand, there are various compelling interpretations why fewer students choose science subjects. First and foremost, science subjects including space science, astronomy or computer science are troublesome. It is clear that these subjects consist of a colossal amount of academic knowledge which is extremely tough and abstract. Therefore, students need to have an intelligent brain to address a plethora of burdensome tasks as well as be capable of resisting the pressure. Another compelling point is that employment opportunities for those who have a certification related to science majors is scarce. In fact, when in large-sized enterprises, they can hire hundreds of workers, but recruiting science experts only three people is maximum. As a result, these days, the vast majority of students are more likely to pursue a profession that is less problematic but it is straightforward for them to seek jobs.
There are a number of interpretations behind this tendency and I would argue that it can have some adverse implications on society. In fact, the number of students who study science and the ones studying other majors are able to be inequality. As a repercussion, there is a labor shortage in fields of science, as well as an insufficiency of technological innovations and discoveries, thus lacking scientists to decelerate the development of society. Additionally, due to the less career prospects in science, the more students majoring in it may be redundant. As a result, the burden of unemployment on society would increase.
In conclusion, the problem of studying science subjects not being taken by students is caused by a number of factors as discussed in this essay, and this issue may bring negative impacts on the society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...ely acknowledged that students choosing study science subjects as their major in many...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir major in many nations is a minority. Although there are undoubtedly some reasons of t...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urdensome tasks as well as be capable of resisting the pressure. Another compelli...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dverse implications on society. In fact, the number of students who study science...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31888544892 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19562238311 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0467968437 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246221597323 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779525781077 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729760493365 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159452033681 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02862432004 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
...ely acknowledged that students choosing study science subjects as their major in many...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir major in many nations is a minority. Although there are undoubtedly some reasons of t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urdensome tasks as well as be capable of resisting the pressure. Another compelli...
^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dverse implications on society. In fact, the number of students who study science...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31888544892 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19562238311 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0467968437 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246221597323 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779525781077 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729760493365 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159452033681 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02862432004 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.