Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Considering an irrefutable fact, sports has become a new religion in present era. A few multinational companies sponsor major sports events in order to advertise their products. Some people have positive opinion about this, while others believe that there are certain downsides to this. In my opinion, when multinational companies sponsor sporting events, it is advantageous for their products as well as the sports.
On the one hand, it is quite compelling that when big companies sponsor sports events, both the parties benefit. Sports events are promoted which could certainly motivate people to participate in various sports activities. In addition to this, talented youngsters may get inspired by the fame and money that accomplished players get and would want to pursue a career in sports. By showing their advertisements during these events, even the companies which sponsor them can reach more consumers. Thus organizations would certainly be profited. Many firms such as Airtel, Idea and Pepsi funded many sports competitions and this enhanced their publicity, which in turn is crucial for meeting their sales targets.
On the other hand, there are also certain drawbacks to this. It may divert the attention of people from sports to their products. Furthermore, when ads are shown during sporting events, they may dampen the spirit and enthusiasm of the spectators. Cricket on television is becoming unwatchable due to intrusive ads for example; the broadcast of the tri-series final between India and Pakistan drew plenty of rage on social media for the volume of commercial breaks because it tried to break the tempo of the game.
In conclusion, even though product adverts distract viewers of sports competitions to a small extent, sports events are promoted to a great extent during these competitions which are sponsored by big multinational firms. Hence, it is good that sports events are sponsored by big organizations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... sponsor them can reach more consumers. Thus organizations would certainly be profit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3660130719 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84490967216 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3591995596 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224056983074 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813968198783 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652277152121 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141212986284 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792164299206 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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