In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
A healthy mind resides in a healthy body. In certain countries the average body weight is increasing while overall health is declining. In this contemplation, I will discuss the cause of these issues and the measures that can be taken to prevent these.
Firstly, with the advent of technology the people of twenty first century no longer require any physical labor. Therefore, this generation spends three fourth of their day glued to the laptop. Rest of the day is spent in travelling from work to home. Due to this sort of white collar jobs, people now suffer from health issues caused by prolonged sitting. These include obesity, hypertension, diabetes, depression, insomnia and cognitive disorders. For instance, a study reported that almost sixty percent of the population of USA does not have time for any kind of workout in their daily routine.
Moreover, people nowadays involve in binge eating habits especially involving junk food. While junk food can be available in few minutes, it is even inexpensive. This leads to serious health issues such as diabetes or even cancer.
It is high time that we should take measures to prevent the issue of obesity and avoid exaggeration of health problems related to increasing body weight. Firstly, the adolescents should make a habit of spending at least one hour every day in some kind of physical workout. Also, the teenagers should be advised by their parents to restrict the intake of junk food. Furthermore, educational campaigns should be launched for school children to spread awareness about the importance of physical fitness by involving in strength training, healthy eating, running, yoga or brisk walking.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that that obesity is a serious issue especially in developed countries. The youth should be aware about the serious health implications of obesity. It is high time that we look into this matter before the problems aggravates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... matter before the problems aggravates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19808306709 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71620366567 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7730808752 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6315789474 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195001373369 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539553201914 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545503547704 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107965011134 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679118597404 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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