In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them ?
The struggle in growing in the level of people’s weight and is an alarming problem of this society. This is mainly due to the unhealthy diet and sedentary lifestyle of individuals in some cities. However, there are a number of measures that can implemented to resolve the issue of this problem.
One of the most contigent reasons for the increase in people’s average weight is clearly the unhealthy diet they live on. With the popular in food advertising, it encourages peole to buy sugary drinks, high-fat snacks and other unhealthy foods because of saving times for most people. As a result, this tendency has a corrosive effect on people health with the occur of several diseases, such as heart attack. Additionally, this problem could be attributed to the sedentary lifestyle of people. Idleness is alluring and modern people are too busy with their work to set aside a reasonable amount of time to work out or do physical exercises. The outcome of such idleness is getting out of shape and even losing some cognitive vitality.
However, there are some solutions which can solve this problem. First and foremost, people need to be updated on nutrition and its implications. While watching some advertisement on these junk fooods, we should have a choice to pick up what they want to eat and drink to stay healthy. Moreover, deceisive is the role government should plays in increasing its population’s level of fitness. Which mean that restricting the advertising of unhealthy foods and tightening up on foods of unclear origin could also have far-reaching effect.
To conclude, the popular of both fast food and the sedentary lifestyle is the main reason which lead to the increase in the average weight and the decline in the fitness’s level of some people. Only when we have a choice to pick a fresh food and the participation of government on restrict the advertising of unhealthy foods, will this situation be remedied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99074074074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80796186312 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8422785564 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230956754078 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729473025494 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442324801165 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13358384043 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129915405926 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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