Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this ? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
Many people choose to settle and remain in their birthplace for their entire life. This may be due to feeling secure in a known location and having the advantage of continual family support. However, they may risk missing many opportunities by doing so.
To begin with, there are many reasons why most people choose to live near the place they was born. Firstly, when some safety people are familiar with the life there, so they often want to live in these places for a long time in stead of moving to a new place because it is difficult for them to get on well with the new things. For example, most of my cousin in my hometown often want to return to live in the place where they were born although they lived to study in Ha Noi 7 years ago. Moreover, the cost of new accomodation is too high for any people to purchase, which means that they would rather live in their home than moving away there.
The major advantage of remaining in one place is the support from their relatives and friends. By living close to parents there is built-in babysitting for example and the knowledge that should time become difficult the option of moving back into the parental home is available. Not only that but family bonds between the generations can become stronger as they can spend more time with each other more easily.
On the other hand, yet refraining from moving away can lead to lost opportunities, especially in one’s career. Improving your professional standing and income usually requires obtaining a superior job that may not be available close by. Therefore, refusing to move can mean stagnating in your career and being financially worse off in the long run.
In conclusion, relocating from one’s birthplace can be confronting, especially if one is risk-averse. Staying put also builds strong family relationships and the safety of familial support. However, it does mean that an individual may miss out on opportunities related to their careers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...to live in these places for a long time in stead of moving to a new place because it is dif...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...een the generations can become stronger as they can spend more time with each othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84272997033 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58392746349 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575667655786 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0007145517 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297816419428 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863371143806 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748077352155 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131510561749 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983862575662 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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