Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this ? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
Some people live close to their birthplace most of their lives, possibly because they are put off by the risks involved in relocating far away. While this allows them to easily get support from their family, they may miss many opportunities because of it.
Those who do not move far away their entire lives may be afraid of taking risks. Relocating means a person will have to leave behind all the things they are familiar with in the area they have been living in and start a new life in another place. But what if they can’t find a job that pays them well enough to maintain their current lifestyle? What if they have trouble making new friends? It’s much safer to keep everything the same and not venture into an unforeseeable future.
Support from family could be the greatest advantage that a person can gain when living close to their birthplace. This is because it may well be where their parents are living. Therefore, when they lose their job and can’t pay rent, for example, they can just move in with their parents. When they have kids but can’t afford childcare, their parents can take care of the kids when they are working.
However, a person may lose many opportunities if they stay in the same area all their lives. Take, for example, computer science graduates who have been living in a city that is not a tech hub. How are they able to grow their career if they don’t move to places like San Francisco and New York City.
In conclusion, some people do not relocate far away from their birthplace probably because they are too concerned about the risks involved. Although this brings the benefit of family support, it can also result in them missing many opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30711700806 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3972242261 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301759892803 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106044719067 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589053132415 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17219926201 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476475757426 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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