In some countries there are strict rules of behaviour for children, however in certain countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. I believe that freedom and discipline go hand in hand.
Freedom has its own pros and cons and likewise strict rules of behaviour also has its own pros and cons. Firstly, if we talk about freedom among children, specially in the western world, it has its own benefits. It allows the children to explore what they love. Whether its sports or studies, freedom give them a chance to explore there passion and excel in what they love. It is believed the person never gets tired if he makes his passion his profession. This will indeed help the country in some or the other way. On the contrary, freedon has some disadvantages also. Children with extra amount of freedom often gets indulge in drugs, smoking, drinking etc. Such children eventually harm their health and become a source of tension for their family.
Similarly, if we talk about strict rules of behaviour also has its pros and cons. With strict rules such as rising early, staying away from drugs helps the children to eventually become a good and healthy citizen. Often children learn discipline and sincerity in there routine activities. This in turn may have some negative effect that kids might not get enough chance to pursue what they love as their carrier option. Doing a work which is a botheration and one person dont love actually leads to irritation.
Thus, hammering upon the nail, I pen down saying that there should be a proper balance between rules and freedom. Taking the congnizance of the fact that extra amount of freedom may not turn out to be good for kids, there should be certain rules for them too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ontrary, freedon has some disadvantages also. Children with extra amount of freedom ...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...k which is a botheration and one person dont love actually leads to irritation. Thu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77333333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31930066088 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9478971417 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5555555556 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320138532 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950513171742 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101040082329 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208958572997 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947078680355 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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