In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's generation with the increase in modernization, conduct of teenagers with their family, society and teachers is a major concern. While there are countries who hold a popular belief that uncompromising rules of behavior should be followed by children, other countries think that kids must have the freedom of doing whatever they want to do. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and will conclude with the help of various examples.
Countries who advocate this strict rules of behavior, argue that it will be good for the growth of country. As children are the future of nation so they have to be developed in a strict environment .For instance, one who obey and follow the healthy pieces of advice of their parents touch the success in short period of time as compared to the one of do not. Authorities of countries should not give privilege to stay away from parents when they are above 18 or they can marry without the permission of their parents. These kind of rules give rise to the different level of thinking among the new generation.
Nations, that believe that children should be provided with the freedom are mostly the developed ones. According to them when a child is above 18 they are free to do anything without letting their parents know. To illustrate, in some countries if mother or father punish their kids for doing any kind of unhonourable act, can be held in prison if their child call the police for help. This should not be done because parents have the responsibility for their little ones and they know better how to nourish them.
To conclude, from the above discussed positive and negative aspects, it can be said that freedom should not be given for all the activities. Rules and regulations must be designed according to the welfare of both kids and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8231511254 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55522031469 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3620075938 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295432234443 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105153533761 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920803982235 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181951453414 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786352854941 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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