In some countries, children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
The children are the greatest asset that a country can have because they will grow up and replace the current workforce. Many countries are having a greater percentage of the population who are either adolescent or at the initial age which is an advantage as compared to other nations.
The developed countries take responsibility and formulate strict regulations for their integral component of the society. These laws often encompass the behavioral aspects and compulsory education. While underdeveloped or developing countries often lack the legal infrastructure to deal with the demeanor aspect of the kids, as a result, they often get involved in undesired activities at very initial age. The question arises that why there is a need to initiate laws pertaining to them, this is because, at the adolescent age, they get fantasized to some activities like smoking or drinking which are detrimental to their health.
Furthermore, the most common prevalent laws for monitoring children behavior abstain them from drinking, smoking, driving and having intimate relations up to a certain age. The most recent example of such law prevents kids from using social media so that they don’t waste their precious time on unproductive things.
All these laws are for the betterment of children and sometimes they feel that they have grown enough to make their own decisions. However, the parents and society agreed that they must abide all the rules as they lack experience and their judgment might be clouded.
I firmly believe that the children should completely follow the rules so that a process of better civilization can be continued.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30916030534 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84178952936 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3873804036 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288777449464 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10471187164 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580338433475 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157019550947 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496789794042 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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