Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?

The selection of apparels may represent one’s values and behavioural characteristics. While many disagree that choice of clothes shed any light on someone’s culture and character, but others find it conclusive. I will support the former view and present my arguments in the ensuring writing.
Many cultures are associated with a specific type of clothes. For example, apparels are worn by a woman in the Middle East and many Muslim countries, often include full body cover and a veil as well. In addition to that, a specific colour of wearing can also guide us about relating a piece of cloth or a person wearing it, to a specific community. To illustrate this, a white colour gown is normally worn by Christian workers (nuns). Anyone seeing someone wearing the aforementioned clothes, will immediately relate her to a specific community and reckon them as religious.
Furthermore, the selection of typical dress also highlights the ethnicity, culture and general character of someone. It is a representation of a whole community and culture. Many Asian countries dwellers wear a piece of fabric around their lower part of the body while for the upper part of the body, they wear loose shirts. As an alternate, in the Western European and American cultures, they prefer clothes which are thinly attached to their bodies. These choices of clothes are based on a specific environmental condition.
Different regions of the world have different interpretations relating to wearing clothes. For instance, if someone in western culture starts wearing a veil, she might be considered to be influenced by religious beliefs while someone wearing short dresses in conservative countries would generally be regarded as western or lacking moral values.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the choice of clothes tells a lot about an individual, his/her culture and guesstimate of behavioural actions.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
... worn by Christian workers nuns. Anyone seeing someone wearing the aforementioned clot...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wears'.
Suggestion: wears
...nced by religious beliefs while someone wearing short dresses in conservative countries...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28052805281 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01286331557 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0952741127 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149253123572 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469723593463 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047212881408 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890422837222 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447021082634 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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