In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel
less safe than ever before.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
solve it?
In some nations, in spite of a decline in the number of severe offences, the citizens feel more threatened as compared to the past. The primary cause of this phenomenon is the chance of re-offence by the ex-convicts and most viable solution is a public awareness campaign to deter this problem.
The major cause of this threat is the probability of re-offence by the criminals because society refuses to accept them and this rejection is due to the stigma associated with these ex-prisoners. Moreover, due to their criminal record, they fail to get secure a better place neither at work nor in society. As a result, it is more likely that they returned back to their criminal world due to peer pressure and their families. For example, a research report published in the Daily times states that due to unemployment among many offenders after leaving the prison chance of re-offence inclined to 60%.
A long term solution to this predicament is the government should launch a publicity campaign in the media and in schools to educate people to consider them like the way were before committing the crime. Those who have completed their detention time and became a good member of society, people should accept them and give them all the rights to live in society. An awareness campaign could shed some light on this difficult situation and allow people to be more open and honest about it. For instance, a similar initiative in Japan resulted in a 40% decrease in crime and chance of re offence.
In conclusion, the chance of committing a further crime by the delinquents is a major issue that results in people living with great fear; however, it can be addressed through educating people to give them a second chance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...s a result, it is more likely that they returned back to their criminal world due to peer pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89491525424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64814982596 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.308448025 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117522137478 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451472794426 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402818764761 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760459365639 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294011071938 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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