In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?
"House is considered as a heaven by everyone." As many people like to have their own house as other section of people prefer to rent a house for living. The given topic asserts that renting a house is more beneficial or not than having his own house. I will try to explain that how disadvantages of renting a house outweigh the advantages of buying a house.
On the one side, there is a section of people who thinks that renting a house has some disadvantages. As people are living in a rent house they needs to follow strict rules and regulations. Most of the things should be done according to the owner's will. Moreover, rules and regulations will also bring more restrictions in the tenant's different activities. The suitable example of this is that sometimes owner decided the time to come in to the house. Late comers will not tolerated. Also, security is also a disadvantage of renting a house. As in a house, sometime, 2 or 3 tenants resides in a single house, so, the doors of the house cannot remain closed all the time. Furthermore, tenants are paying a particular amount of money as rent to landlord. So, the extra burden of expenses always bare by the tenants. This could hamper the people's monthly budget.
On the other hand, other section of people are in the favour of having his own house. As we live in our house, this gives freedom in doing many things. Persons will not get bound to anyone's rules and regulations. Moreover, owners using this opportunity to renovate their house frequently. Furthermore, the sense of satisfaction can be felt in our own house which could be missing in renting a house. This will make owner feel more relaxed.
From the above discussion, I tend to believe that there are more problems while living in a rental house rather than living in a buying house. As feeling of satisfaction and relaxation are the most important, so, person should go for his own house when he/she can afford.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
... people are living in a rent house they needs to follow strict rules and regulations....
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'tolerate'
Suggestion: tolerate
...e in to the house. Late comers will not tolerated. Also, security is also a disadvantage ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70760233918 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68922565293 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2191570738 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1818181818 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491611127631 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128167405427 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121946829934 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323334590473 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166919359946 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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