In some countries some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to technological advancement some nations are telecasting live criminal trials for people from law courts. This phenomenon has has both positive and negative impacts on society which will be elucidated in following paragraph. However, I deem that merits of this are more than its demerits.
To begin with, general people are interested in criminal prosecution and how the court will find them guilty. Firstly, many people do not have awareness regarding criminal laws, so this type of criminal trials make themselves educate. Society functions better in response to crime and citizens understand theirs social responsibilities. Students Learn that how any wrong doing can ruin their future. Sometime students can find career in this field by watching videos. For examples, many lawyers accepts that why they choose this profession as career. Additionally, government can represent theirs self as transparent process of the justice.
On the contrary side, sometimes people get false motive from criminal trials if they find criminal win case by manipulating evidences. For instance, in money laundering cases, criminal hire best lawyers and manipulate things in favour of them, and some cases they win. Criminals find loophole from law system as well as motivated by other criminals.
It has a detrimental effects on children's nature and behaviour, because in early age they are seeing brutality and crime on television.
In recapitulation, criminal prosecution is government process to punish criminal by implementing constitution laws. By telecasting trials online, people believe in government justice system and find themselves as countries true asset. Advantages of criminal trials television shows are many as compared to disadvantages. Countries should make their societies understandable by approaching transparent and hassle free system.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71223021583 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04218736939 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9232311291 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245469381098 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693922917323 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583446255816 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110457208373 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592155615004 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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