Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that in future being bilingual will help in the growth of career prospectus. Whether, children should start learning a new language in kindergarten or in secondary school is a never-ending debate. In my opinion, a child should begin learning a foreign lingo in primary school as they are benign.

On one hand, some people believe that secondary school children are mature enough to opt language they want to learn. This is because of their adaptation with the world has developed, however, in some scenarios it is observed that rather than learning a new dialect children would prefer to learn other skills. Consequently, they come under high pressure from public schools to learn language as a core subject. Thus, I believe that <span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;
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On the other hand, others feel that children are benign and have a potential to learn a new language and inculcate multiple skills at the same time. The reason for this is that children at this age have high observation power and they progressively adapt and grasp to whatever being taught. For example, research by catalyst and other methods have shown conclusively that child from birth till they complete primary school can learn a new lingo similar to their mother tongue, whereas, this ability gradually decreases with time.

To conclude, although choice of language to learn should be of that child but I believe adopting a new language as a proficient user could only be possible if stared from very early stage of school.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44363636364 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.224582919 2.80592935109 364% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.845153132 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.090909091 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269345831396 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138348380635 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775400723136 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112385631872 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113336772266 0.056905535591 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.37 12.4159519038 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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