Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Every country have a yearly budget to spent on different sports to represent their country at international level. However, there are few peoples believe that this money is well spent on more general things which help majority of their citizens. I completely disagree with this notion.
The money governments spent on athelets might looks benifiting individual only, but it eventually helps building the good repo of the country at international platform. when a athelete of any country wins any tournament at internation level, it not only make whole country proud but also give sense of power to the country. For example, every year China spent humongous amout on training their athelet to compete in olympics, which results in china winning maximum number of gold medal every year and this in return has given china recognition globally.
Having said that, while country focus on the training of their international players, it also help boosting their economy. When the players of a country are known internationally, they attracts big brands to invest in their country and also open different sources of income for the government. For instance, if we talk about BCCI i.e. India's cricket board, which is one of the richest board in the world hence, it contribute to the Indian economy. BCCI plan different tournamnets in India where many tourists also visit to India and help improve tourism.
Many countries focusing on providing talented individuals proper training and support so that they can perform well and win medals and tournaments at international events. In my opinion, it is the right use of public fund as they not only provide their country a global recognition but also boost govenrmnet income by different means like inviting brands to invest, attracting tourists etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...ndividual only, but it eventually helps building the good repo of the country at interna...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... the country at international platform. when a athelete of any country wins any tour...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...country at international platform. when a athelete of any country wins any tourna...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...of their international players, it also help boosting their economy. When the player...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to boost' or 'boost'.
Suggestion: to boost; boost
...eir international players, it also help boosting their economy. When the players of a co...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...country are known internationally, they attracts big brands to invest in their country a...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
Suggestion: contributes
...he richest board in the world hence, it contribute to the Indian economy. BCCI plan differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17931034483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70166197143 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9350476539 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117546316488 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508411802113 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548644604011 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846551169531 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579268793952 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.