Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Today, supplying many of toys to entertain the children becomes is widely practiced by the parent. There are certain benefits to offer a variety of toys for the youngster, however, the negative effects are worth to consider.
I presume that stock up several numbers of toys to console the children is highly beneficial, since nowadays, numerous playthings are designed for educational and child development purpose. Take Legos, for instance, it could demonstrate both child imagination and mathematical thinking by developing symmetry, balance, shapes, and sizes tower or building. Another example is origami. The youngster who plays with it could stimulate their creativity by learning to fold and forming a paper based on the pattern. moreover, it also highly useful for child psychology such as training their patience and finding a solution. Consequently, the children who play with these kinds of toys are smarter, persistence and do better in term of problem-solving compares to their peer.
Despite the advantages, there is some drawback to have too many toys. The gravest problem of this case is children become anti-social. They prefer playing in the home using provided-toys to playing with their friends. For long-term, this attitude could have a bad impact on their personality. Moreover, common plaything used by children these days are designed to play indoor, such as video games and train set. It could make children inactive. As a result, it could lead them to bad health outcome such as child obesity.
To conclude, I believed that providing a lot of toys for the youngster is highly recommended as long as it has benefit for their development. however, the parent should ensure that the children have sufficient time to socialize and doing an outdoor activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, moreover, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27719298246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86371683571 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2844458506 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341434233903 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969217170106 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572547474612 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201512507267 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321071274376 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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