Some parents buy their children a large number of toy to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys ?
Nowadays, some parents buy their children many of toy to play with. this is a popular problem and soon became a major sources of debatement. In the essays, i will discuss both side of views and give my opinion.
First, there is no denying that purchased big amount of playthings for kids will make them happy. children will only focus on playing toys and their parents will not be annoyed. this is one of the best solution for any kindle who want their kid keep silent and let them doing their work. another merits of buying large amount of toys is the motivation of kid's mindset. this can be explained that when a kid is bought a toys that he love, he will definitely happy all days. some hormone which are produced during this happy period will affected much in their brain. the secretion of an endocrine gland that is transmitted by the blood to the tissue on which it has a specific effect. children's creation will be profited wonderful. For instance, a survey was made and the result show that the children who owned a big number of toy are more creative that the one who have nothing.
In another hand, a child who own lots of toy will have variety of demerits too. they become selfish, stated to think with the thought that whatever they want, they can have it, no matter what everybody think. kid who are being selfish will easily cry for anything which was not follow their idea. if this child did not have any punishment or a talk to solve this problem, their psychology will be more self-giving For instance, my brother who always gets what he wants, he can cry for such a silly things such as candies cause my mother did not allowed him to eat.
In conclusion, treating easily to children by buying them too much kind of toys have two side of views one will ruin their mindset but they still can develop their mind. So if you are a good parents, make sure that you make up your mind before buying them anything they want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4649859944 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17766533294 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7417292763 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305280474679 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996540497243 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102145171412 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184722760294 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502750647164 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.