Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Since ancient time, humanity has developed approaches to raising children, and debates on this issue are extremely heated.
Some parents feel they have to fulfil their children’s every wish to make them happy, but this type of parenting can demonstrate unexpected consequences.
I am confident that this way of raising kids will lead to the problems in adulthood, and this essay will discuss the main ones.
The presence of reasonable rules of behavior is a necessary condition for the development of a child. Limiting purchases forms a certain frame of reference for the child’s behavior, for example, buying toys as a reward. The baby understands the consequences of their action and preserves the presence of rules as caring for himself. According to the latest research in kid’s psychology, infants whose parents fulfil all their wishes perceive their parents’ behavior as indifference. Thus, sensible refusals or prohibitions are a necessary element of the education and the absence of the specifications negatively affects the life of the child.
However, main repercussions of this parenting will manifest themselves when the babies grow and they have to make their own decisions. I am convinced that the uncontrolled fulfillment of all the child’s desires leads to their inability to adequately assess the surrounding reality. The child ceases to understand the value of money and does not know how to handle it, which makes him more vulnerable to the real world. For instance, some millionaires have directed their savings to charity, leaving their children money only for a good education, so that they do not lose touch with the real world. Hence, the greatest benefit will not be fulfilling all the child’s whims, but smoothly preparing him for the challenges that he may face in adulthood.
In conclusion, the practice of giving in to all children's whims cannot lead to good results. As a result, a person will grow up not understanding the value of the money earned and not knowing how to handle it competently.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20909090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94417137532 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8235745569 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354189064464 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108275791522 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989568346935 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172900708405 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866570999876 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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