Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that when it comes to taking care of children, close relatives are the best option, however other parents feel that childcare institutions will give better services for their kids at earlier age. This essay will argue that although children will be in safe hands by their family members, I believe that having the opportunity to be taught by professionals will benefit kids in the future.
Perhaps the main reason why parents are in favour of having their kids been taken care of by family members is safety concerns. Leaving their little ones with a close family member like grandparents makes some parents feel more confident as they are sure that their kids will be well taken care of and safer with someone who cares about them. To illustrate, in my country, according to a recent survey, safety concerns is what makes 45% of parents prefer to leave their kids with a family member during their working time.
Despite this argument, other parents feel that childcare centers is best option to take care of their children because of the chance they will have in learning from professional people. That is to say that such institutions have skilled and well-trained employees who will educate and taking care of kids which results in them being prepared for their first year at school. For example, according to a study conducted in the UK children who went to childcare center are more into passing the first year difficulties at school.
In conclusion, although having children taken care by family member make them safer, I firmly believe that the chance of being taught by highly skilled people at childcare center prepare kids for their first year at school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4018917675 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.1755013075 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 157.444444444 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30542210844 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148306455875 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483693351978 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202374465122 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479538692389 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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