Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better caregivers for their young children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that when parents are at work, close relations provide the best care to young children, while others believe daycare centres offer a better option. While many relatives can be trusted to take care of youngsters properly, this essay argues that childcare professionals are better equipped to care for young children due to their training and experience.
Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their young ones with grandparents and siblings when they are at work. This is often an issue of trust, as parents feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family. For example, a recent study showed that 62% of working mothers prefer a member of their immediate family to provide care when they are working. However, this essay argues that most family members are not trained childcare professionals and may not have the skills required to fully nurture a child.
Others say that daycare centres are a better option due to the fact that most of their employees are skilled professionals. Many of those employed in these centres are highly experienced and have diplomas in child development, which means they have the background and training for how best to care for children. For instance, a recent government survey of childcare centres in the UK reported that about 80% of their employees have some form of professional training related to their jobs. For this reason, this essay believes that the children left in the care of these centres are better looked after.
In conclusion, although some parents may prefer the bond of trust inherent within a family when choosing a caregiver for their children, this essay finds that children are better off under the care of daycare centres due to their staffs’ professional training and experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12925170068 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57977445606 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6880358196 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332444613526 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14331066057 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545335855753 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229476503653 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209142019838 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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