Some people are convinced that mature age employees are beneficial to a company. Others think that younger employees contribute more and hence are more beneficial to a company. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is observed that different people have a varied opinion about the employees. According to some individuals, mature employees are beneficial to company as compared to young one, while others believe that younger employees contribute more and therefore they are more beneficial to company. Both the views will be critiqued before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
One the one hand, older employees is equipped with year of experience. Hence, less training is required, which save time and billable hours. Secondly, exodus rate is also lower in case of matured employees. These employees are capable of doing the job under stress as they have already had a lot of experience of dealing with stress management. Therefore, turnover rate is also less in this case. Furthermore, they have better communication skill. Older workers often understand the workplace politics and know how to convey their ideas effectively and thoughtfully. They also recognise the importance of face to face communication and lost gestures such as hand written notes. Not only that, they have a good leadership skill. They can lead, manage and utilize the staff effectively and efficiently which increase the productive rate and ultimate benefit to organisation. However, there are also some limitations of hiring the matured staff which cannot be averted. One of the biggest disadvantages of hiring a more mature employee in this day and age is that they are less likely to embrace all modern technology. Also, they are mostly occupying at higher position, so they likely to command a higher salary as compared to younger generation.
On the other hand, young employees are more active and vigorous to work. Since it is a first job, their eagerness and enthusiasm will help the employers to expect much dedication performance. Also, young generation develop positive attitude towards work. They build healthy relations with the team to understand about his/ her first nature of job. At least but not last, they are more innovative and flexible as they are able to understand the latest technology and arrange themselves accordingly. But, we cannot avert the downside. One of the major downside is that they have not clear vision of their careers. They join for a company and once they find any another opportunity they will switch to other companies, this will be a huge loss to the organisation.
After analysing both views, it is believed that both are equally important for the development of any organisation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21890547264 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82154914466 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6135747083 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.92 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.08 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192566315109 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498687467612 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961401646313 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158049946669 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162257110571 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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