Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
For some who have no taste of art, it has not been understandable why the governments have to invest in them. Therefore, this is a topic of debate whenever somebody brings it up. This essay will serve as a tool to describe why governments have to put money in different forms of art such as painting and music.
Having a creative society is the root of any growth for any country. Governments who strive for the development of their country promote, therefore, creativity. Countries invest in music have shown are far more creative than those which did not have attached any value to the art. In a study at Aalborg University on 300 students, the effect of learning music on the creativity of them has been investigated. The study showed that not only improved learning music their creativity by 20 percent also has a positive effect on their performance in other topics.
Art has been always served as a way that the member of society could communicate with each other without directly referring to each other. Therefore, governments have to facilitate learning and illustration of art to the public in order a make this type of communication possible. The result of this is a healthier society in psychological terms. Since people have something to demonstrate their feelings such as anger or happiness, fewer members of it will perform vandalism or other types of damages.
In summary, Art is absolutely necessary for having a creative and healthy society and governments have to pay great attention to it and make sure it is accessible for everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
...r performance in other topics. Art has been always served as a way that the member of soci...
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Line 13, column 20, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...pes of damages. In summary, Art is absolutely necessary for having a creative and healthy socie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8833869762 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5907604724 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153325307423 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610254995158 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529288112944 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970411353766 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666372444437 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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