Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
From the last 4 decades, sports have been a vital source of entertainment for most people. Spectators have indifferent views when it comes to being successful in sports; while some believe that a positive outlook can overshadow weak physique, others support the opposite view. This essay
will converse about both the views and will argue why having a positive attitude is superior to extreme physical fitness.
Outdoor games demand players to have robust health in order to stand, run or jump for an extended period. Owing to such needs, it is obvious that unless a professional player is unable to meet such demands, it less likely to achieve great success in such sports. Apparently, the teams who have exceptionally healthy players, win titles during rigorous events. Real Madrid football club, for instance, has won multiple football titles because of being a team of the strongest and healthiest players. Due to the multiple victories of healthy teams, people tend to believe that physical fitness is indispensable for success in sports.
Despite such examples, I and many others still think that optimism is a key factor to achieve success in sports. Many a time, a weak opponent has successfully subdued their stronger competitor via their perseverance and mental attitude. For instance, Bangladesh during the 2009 Cricket World Cup conquered India which was considered as a top 3 teams for the finals by their sheer optimism and strategy. In addition to this, people like Karloy Takkas have won Olympic gold twice even after having their arm amputated again by the virtue of sound mental health. Therefore, such examples reinforce the fact that who important a team or a person’s outlook matter during games.
In conclusion, although being strong can help a team to endure longer in a game, it is the mentally sound and optimistic team that clinches the victory despite being at the brink of defeat just because of its persistence to win or an attitude to keep moving forward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63606524506 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5532163343 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215890164128 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666249718924 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457169376098 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110341264445 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195269068718 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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