Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As many of my friends and relatives never accept and even debate on how to lead a life rather than earning more Dollars. For instance one of my close colleagues trust for leading a good life we need a good amount of salary.
Firstly, my family members say with there experience, whoever leading the life they have to lead with happily. As per there point of view if we get a lot of money and not living a healthier life then there is no meaning to whatever we are earning. For example, my bother-in-law earns around Rs.20000 per month and is having one kid who is going to primary school and he works for 7 Hr per day. he starts his day morning at 10 AM and finishes the job by 5 PM and he will pick his kid from school. he has a lot of time to spend with his kid at home. Coming to his expenses monthly he spends Rs.5000 for house rent, Rs.3000 for groceries, Rs.2000 for miscellaneous expenditure. So, by his experience, if we want to earn more then we need to spend time in office more.
Secondly, my colleague, strongly believes that if we earn more salary then we can enjoy life more. In his experience, he spends almost 9 hours a day at the office and earns Rs.50000 per month. he won't have time to pick his kid from school and spend time with his family. In a month they will all go on one trip and enjoy the holidays. he thinks for enjoying the life he needs money.
In my point, of view, if we are earning a lot but not spending the time with whom we are living with then there is no meaning for what we are earning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16835016835 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29414277407 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8542091492 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153009329884 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067339227843 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468158043815 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112324655142 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379624160115 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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